looking much improved, Josh - a quick observation however; for me, the colour of actual plastic bag itself is a bit 'off' in terms of my expectations of a plastic bag (I know, some of the conversations we have on this course...). If it was a cheap shopping bag, wouldn't it be more likely to be white or that particular blue you always see? Somehow that grey is making it more 'blob-like' and less readable as a commonplace plastic bag:
looking much improved, Josh - a quick observation however; for me, the colour of actual plastic bag itself is a bit 'off' in terms of my expectations of a plastic bag (I know, some of the conversations we have on this course...). If it was a cheap shopping bag, wouldn't it be more likely to be white or that particular blue you always see? Somehow that grey is making it more 'blob-like' and less readable as a commonplace plastic bag:
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