tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2766537641564296451.post395902616251450172..comments2023-08-25T00:35:10.127-07:00Comments on Josh Aldis - BA Hons CG Arts & Animation - UCA Rochester: La Belle et la BĂȘte (1946)Josh Aldishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11532479399402372695noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2766537641564296451.post-46494805379431319712013-11-11T07:18:23.988-08:002013-11-11T07:18:23.988-08:00Josh - re. Prague, there's something missing d...Josh - re. Prague, there's something missing details on your health form you'll need to supply before you'll be signed off: they are <br /><br />Name, address and telephone number of doctor on health form<br /><br />Cheers.tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2766537641564296451.post-43145977384448831032013-11-11T00:34:49.466-08:002013-11-11T00:34:49.466-08:00Hi Josh,
Another well written review!
Have a look...Hi Josh,<br />Another well written review! <br />Have a look back at my previous comments on your 'Alien' review, as most of the issues still stand for this review too... basically, try and link your images more to the text; so say, for example 'The production art works alongside the costumes and sets in such a way that it feels as though the film purposefully works better with the lack of colour, as shown in figure 4'. <br />You are also still missing bits in your bibliography and illustrations list - have a look here<br /><br />http://community.ucreative.ac.uk/article/27187/Referencing<br />Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com